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Virgin Snow

The entire world
Is snow covered and glittering
(brilliant, pure)
It makes you feel like a virgin.
The twigs that lie scattered
tattoo the white flesh of the ground.
I close my eyes and watch the glowing yellow sun
from behind my eyelids
My cheeks turn pink and sting
when the chillwind blows
(the breath of the Mother)
and  I wrap my arms around myself
wishing they were yours.

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  • a12345678
    December 20, 2007
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    calm and peaceful yet divine imagery.
    nice piece.
    Peace love and empathy,
    Armand le Boursier