Thud…pump…rush…
The noise echoes louder
As his cock pounds you
Encircles you in warm feelings
Your clit swells excitedly
As his juices flow out of you
He ties your hands
And mounts from behind
“You have been a naughty girl”
He enticingly whispers
As the warm breath presses your ear
And slaps your delicate ass
As you moan louder
You feel him distend
And the shaft hit the sweet spot
Making you give in
“No you don’t!”
You shout helplessly
As he picks up speed
And drives you to the end
Delicious spasms erupt
As he rubs you from within
And he doesn’t stop for hours
Don’t you enjoy the hell you are in?
Author notes
I WANT YOU
hope it makes you feel good, it did it to me while i was writing, but maybe i am just horny and will be horny any way
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Good BIG POINTS!!!!! Adult 18+ by WillAlwaysLove.
1500 points, ended December 25, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent erotic
wow..this had me enthralled from the first verse..and just sucked me in further along..will she come?..how could she not?...lol...great write and thanx for sharing..hands down winner in my opinion..best of luck in the contest
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ty so much for commenting on my work
it is always hard for me to write erotic poetry. i am very glad you liked it
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This is an excellent piece. I don't usually comment on erotic pieces, but this one was very well written and had a certain intriguing edge to it...
The title really adds a lot to this write, along with the ending.... It expresses a pure blissful frustration.
Wonderful write!
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Wow. Really nice erotic piece. Very...very... oh, wow! This was smoking hot! Great job. I wish you all the best.
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Yikes..now I said i would be glad to help you out a bit with your poems but hey...I'm 56 yrs old, single (div), no one around and now just what am I sposed to do? I think you need a good spanking!
Seriously....a very erotic and sensual pen well done beginning to end....and you seem to do fine on your own,
Evan
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Well done I like the erotic images you have wrote here. Very sexy and an enjoyable rough ride. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Well done! Very erotic with some sweet kinkiness! I enjoyed it very much. I am so glad you entered! I loved the read! Thank you for sharing. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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ty for letting me enter!
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