Septic suggestions of feeling (slide)
Seldom through
Harbinger's embrace
As a feather in storm
Flowing on cushion of stagnant (fears)
Composed notes
Or
Meaningless words jotted and spoken
In composed gesture we mirrored their prose
Wishfully intended to please
Just sustained longer
In scales of mediocrity
Oh so trivial are
The mundane, mostly (mortal)
Respected, trite concerns
To unfurl,
to belay,
to underly
A cause for affecting
Despondent issues .
The lie seeding (counterfeit)
Grows savory ideals
Much to offspring's regret
They've become
Disillusioned quanta
Extrinsic beauty
Sought
Resplendent
Duller, the atomic level
Mostly codependent
It's, thoughts we're missing
It's between
Definition
(Subliminal
Producing rhythm
Spawned of proper timing
Tightly unravel
To loss or meaning
Thought provoked gravity
Helplessly
Round off levity)
Digression
A diversion
Hidden carefully,
Etched in our gray,
With transparent disgust,
All shape eludes the molten routine
In absence
Form degrades
Faceted decay
Untamed, the wild order (silence)
Style
Sans grace stained glass, a scattered silicate
Woven in crude designs
Hidden, our aquarium of idiom (deflated)
Prescribed therapy
(Through)
Packaged sanity
Detached shards
Remain of inner reflection
Inhaled through deeper meditation
Small doses of clarity
It's fake
Intellect
(as in your intellect)
And you sit around
Regurgitate(ing)
Intricate
Seemingly
Complicated
Progression(s)
(of ideas that aren't your own)
(while you)
Assimilate
(even more)
Retrograde
Fiction
Based (in)
Faith (of)
Sensual
(subjective truths)
a
Reduction
(of what you've stolen)
Entropic
Emotional
Neutrality
Chaos
Grounded
Duality
Particle
Wave
Light
Author notes
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Comments
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a very interesting play on words.. i liked the poem thanks for sharing with the rest of us
keep up the great writing !


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i liked the end of this, but the beginning of the other one better... and you changed my favourite part... hmmmph
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That first stanza is amazing. I really liked the layout of this poem and I thought the way it was set up kept the poem flowing in an interesting way. Nice write.




