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Ropers and Ever After

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Prince Charming of Neverland's
money could not buy,
the skill of riding
her Stallion,

She traded glass slippers
and pink ball gown,

For her enchanted horse,
cowboy,
Levis and Ropers,
running free into dreams
of ever after sunsets,

~her reality.

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Glass Slipper by Martin Paul www.art.com
~Silver~

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  • Metaphorist
    June 20
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    Haha. Love the "Levis and Ropers"! Great piece. Thanks for entering.


  • Sweet Sorrow
    June 19

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    Very excellent write. You did mention all my favorite things in this piece. A very creative piece of work.


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    March 15

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    Ropers are far more comfortable! lol

    great write, well deserving of the trophy.

    Rory


  • M a r l u x i a
    February 16

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    Ooooo... What an awesome write. VERY cool. I love the reference to the typical Cinderella character and how it twists into the reality of today's world... or at least the cowboy-type of reality. This is so creative and so nicely written... I don't know what else to say! Excellent job!
    ~

    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a

  • Riftkin gold member
    February 8

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    love the items used to show the change in her reality. For this shows just how much we all can change in the way we feel.


  • Danna Hobart
    February 6
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    Great use of symbolism and allusion. Thanks for entering.

  • leander gold member
    January 17

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    This one has definately a mysterious feel to it, and again I like the images you've captured in these lines


    thank you for this entry as well!
    Leander

  • earthstar
    January 2
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    I love it I wear boots with eagles on them. I have several pair of boots. Very well done. This is a wonderful read. I truly like it. It left me with a smile on my face and a chuckle in my heart what a great way for me to start my day. Thank you for sharing it with me.

  • Tam gold member
    December 30, 2007
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    would you do me the honor of moving forward to this contest please?

    http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2383814

    thank you! Tammy





  • Tam gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    LOVE THIS WRITE...

    amen and amen again...
    love that you took this outside the box...
    HER REALITY...yes ma'am...some little girls don't wish to wear glass slippers...LOL...some of us prefer boots!
    wonderfully penned...
    thank you for sharing your time and talent with me!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Grey Mouser
    December 21, 2007

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    A Princess in levis staring upwards at the galaxy spread before her as she sits on the open prarie at peace. Where the crush of civiliztions burdens cannot reach her heart and her freedom sings to the universe of happiness and joy. Beautiful imagery my dear. Very well done. Always my best to you in the contest.
    rose*
    Love,
    MOuser


  • Malabu
    December 21, 2007

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    wow I love this girl....enchanting as it is...trading in her glass slippers for a cowboy's boots come to mind...I got to laff though...yep...it's a reality ...love it!
    Mal

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