The pain in my chest is like a knife in my heart.
It won't go away and I am dying.
Daily I feel my life slip away,
to me it is a special feeling,
a feeling of comfort.
If death is the answer,
please set me free.
I'd rather be eaten by the demons in hell,
than suffer this pain forever.
I need a release and I know what it is,
set me free from this world of pain,
let my love wrap his arms around me again.
I beg you, take me to him,
I can't bare life without him.
Just as you took him, take me.
Bring me to the beauty of his presence,
then I will finally be set free,
A simple question,
a simple answer,
I pray.
A contest entry
- Tell me about you by pinkstardust13.
525 points, ended December 28, 2007, 16 entries
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so full of emtion
so sad..can feel your sadness in this write..typo..L1 pain is like I knife..(a)..love the imagery..I'd rather be eaten by the demons in hell, than suffer this pain forever..what a gripping line..love it sis..great write..good luck in the contest..
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Beautifully written....awesomely painful....wonderfully sad....it's your heart poured out on my screen
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wow, very painful. it tugged on my heart to see you in pain like that. it is like i felt just a little of your anguish, but i can never imagine my soul mate dying and me still be here on earth. simply stunning! ty sooo much for entering!
my fav " daily i feel my life slip away, to me it is a special feeling of comfort..." you are thankful for the love, but stricken at the same time because he is lost.
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penned
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Oh I hope that you feel better...
this poem was well penne
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