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the christmas truth


  Twaz the week before Christmas
  And everyone knew
  That there was just a few days
  Until the Christmas delays
  The stores would be packed
  With plenty of people that was a fact
  Then the lights would turn off
  Then the only sound would be a slight cough
  So kids lay sleeping in there warm beds
  As visions of candy canes danced in there heads
  Then as the slay flew off
  The only thing in sight was Roudolph

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  • Chocolate Chip
    February 28, 2008

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    now i'm all in the christmas mood again *singing deck the halls * i like the way how the poem rhymes. and this is definitely the christmas truth


  • storiesuntold gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    Cute write here

    I love the christmas stories this year they were all great


  • Ms Raneika
    December 25, 2007
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    Nice X-mas poem...

    Thanks for entering my contest

    Much Love, Raneika


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 20, 2007
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    Cute write

    I liked this one very much