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Breath In, Breath Out Pt. 3 (Don't Stop)

Touch me, Squeeze me
Baby, be easy
We grindin, We teasing
We sweating and we wheezing
Like,
Breathe in, ahh ahh,
Breathe out,  don’t stop,
Breathe in, ahh ahh,
Breathe out.
Don’t stop;
All the sexy little things that you doing,
I’m about to punish that pussy and leave that cat in ruins,
It was me that you’ve been needing just to fuck with you right,
Now I’m digging that nappy kitty all through the night,
I love it,
when you holla my name and take it like a “G”,
pussy pouring, marinating, saturating the sheets,
we be fucking through the night, we be waking the kiddies,
disturbing the peace, while we doing the nitty gritty,
breathing hard, breathing heavy, making love for so long
don’t stop what you doing, let me hear you sing the song,
Touch me, Squeeze me
Baby, be easy
We grindin, We teasing
We sweating and we wheezing
Like,
Breathe in, ahh ahh,
Breathe out,  don’t stop,
Breathe in, ahh ahh,
Breathe out.

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  • Skwisgaar Skwigelf
    September 12, 2008
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    same as before.


  • ladyhurricane
    January 14, 2008

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    Man this was great, my favorite part was..."It was me that you’ve been needing just to fuck with you right,
    Now I’m digging that nappy kitty all through the night"

    You have a choice for words


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    December 22, 2007

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    Uh,wow...language and visuals to much for me,lol...

    I liked parts of it though,you really outdone it this time...

    • New-n-Improved
      December 26, 2007
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      Thank You

      I appreciate the comment and I look forward to reading your poems as soon as I get to them.


  • TheClimb
    December 21, 2007

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    I'm with the others on this...this is yet another wonderful piece 'n i find it as arousing as the rest!

    May be young, but I have those feelings too...


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    December 20, 2007

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    As always, you have written

    another fabulous piece, loved it Kadafie...now what's with this Collabo Gina talkin bout?
    I can't wait to see yall do your Thug Thizzle listen at me, tring to be hype
    but it's all good

    Lady


  • Pain Angel
    December 20, 2007
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    wow. this was cue. u are a good rapper. it is so graphic, lol. wow....

    "I’m about to punish that pussy and leave that cat in ruins,"
    hahaha


  • MahoganyFlow
    December 20, 2007

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    U got skills boy. A hot one. I'm waiting on that collabo. Or are you backing out? You know me! Holla!

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