Crawl through your skin,
get hooked on me,
ecstacy,
begging to please thee,
hold you in my hands,
as your mind lands,
send you back up high,
make you wonder what it's like to die,
beg me please,
want between my knees,
I'm your favorite drug,
hold you tight and snug,
between the pain and addiction,
I'm waiting to be your affliction,
itching up your spine,
you're all mine,
I'll give you everything,
hear me when your ears ring,
when the agony will sting,
I want to bring,
bring you right to your knees,
nails under the skin,
indulge yourself in the sin,
cry for the dead,
we're screaming in your head,
a demon,
a heathen,
can't break this addiction,
can't change my ambition,
I'll have you on your knees,
beg me please,
please baby please,
SAY MY NAME!
A contest entry
- Tell me about you by pinkstardust13.
525 points, ended December 28, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention
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it was so hard to judge this contest! i absolutely loved your poem. i wish i could give everyone a gold! that is how hard it was to decide. ty for entering!
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wow.....love it.....i feel i know you from some where, or maybe you are a kindred spirit. you had me in your grasp from beginning to end and it made me sad that it ended, i wanted to read more! so intoxicating, ty!
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thanks! maybe a kindred spirit. i believe there are lots of people out there whom i know, but just haven't met in this life.
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