I saw a very odd wind blowing towards me
There were a bunch of knives in it!
The wind caught me and it instantly
Transported me to the grim reaper's castle
But before that transported me all the way
Through dimensions of death!
Very fast!
And I think it was making me go forward in time.
Smack! I hit the front door of the Grim Reaper's castle.
It was very creepy because there were dead bodies hanging from the sides.
One blinked it's eye at me.
I think it was a threat that it would kill me
If I didn't go in.
And suddenly I knew that it was right!
I asked the body what his name was.
He just hung quietly for a second
Then he said-
Mr. Body is my real name.
I opened the door
I walked down a hall
And saw the Grim Reaper
On the throne.
It was gold with red and blue and black all mixed on it
And there were real body legs painted gold.
The Grim Reaper told me to go to the attic.
So I went to the attic-
I heard a noise.
It sounded like red phantoms raining-
It said
You are going to die.
And then a white figure came out from the dark corner of the attic
It said very softly
You are who I was looking for all this time.
And then it chopped off my head
And broke my bones!
And chopped me up and ate me for dinner!
Then it said
YUMMY!
Author notes
I know it is gory, but I am a six year old and I like gory stuff! Picture 2. My sis typed it.
A contest entry
- Imagery -Picture Prompt by Swintha.
390 points, ended December 20, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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look bad but good. good.
we will taketo you later.
- Qtgirl -
Very interesting and different. I knew which picture you used quite easily. This was much more of a story than a poem but I liked that and I enjoyed reading it.
Good luck and well done.
-Swintha
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