I wake up again, the radio still blazing in my ears
reach across, shut it off, pray to god for no more tears...
throw my legs off the side, place my feet on the floor so cold
my lifes a drawn out repetition that is quickly getting old
i wrap my arms around her, feeling every trouble and sorrow
look deep into her eyes, and i get a glimpse into our tomarrow
walking down a hallway full of people, and still i am alone
i hold a hand, it holds me here, this place i call a home
whats the point of crying, and who are you to pray
the boy that know one knows, may have a better day
finally get to my doorway, another pitiful parting moment
let go of all i held on to, and wait for my atonement
take a seat, get comfortable, you should know the drill
they dont care about my life, who i am, or even how i feel
time to leave already, step outside, the air i breathe so cold
my lifes a drawn out repetition that is all too quickly getting old
whats the point of even trying, and are you one to say
that the boy that know one knows, may not live another day
A contest entry
- feeling lost i want sappy stuff people by Pureisolation.
450 points, ended February 15, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PW ONLY - Favorites by Asylaarix.
600 points, ended January 31, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
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very nice
i loved the flow
it was a great write fo'sur
endless -
aww greta job this was full of so much emotion and made such a nice write!
congrats on the trophy, and good luck in the other contest =) -
This write ... was seriously so very sad ... It was full of emotion ... but so beautifully penned ... I loved the ending of this very much ... It was so amazing ... thank you so much for your entry and good luck in the contest ...
Much Love
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ok this poem almost made me cry. seriously it seems like you walked right into my mind and new what to write. I thank you for entering this poem, it is beautufly written. I can relate to this poem so much. I love it. thanks
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that almost (did)make me cry... i <3 you so much your amazing
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Wow!
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C'mon!
Finish it!!
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AAAAAHHHHHHHH
im never on enough!!!!!!!!!!
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