To see it all like me
What a curse that would be!
THe things that run through my mind
Burn bridges left behind.
Yet ask and you shall receive.
Racing
Pacing
That's always there
Rushing around
Floating on air
The ever changing
The never changing
The way he wore his hair!
He's a constant reminder
And everything tends to lead back to him
Yet the other things I think, to list, I can not begin
I think about life,
what it is and what it means
I think about death and the things that intervein
Yet the only thing that I really know
And I'll pass this on to you
Is that life is better left to chance
Yes, everything we do
'Cause in a certain circumstance
If you knew the outcome
You'd maybe stop the negative but you'd miss the positive too
So just think about your life,
What happens if tomarrow never comes,
And make sure that that the ones you love
Know that you care so much for them.
Author notes
Option Seven. It's what I have to say AND it is technically on topic.
A contest entry
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good job
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Great job and great take on the prompt. Thaks for the entery and good luck i the contest!
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Thank you for the compliment and the honorable mention win =]
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Interesting take on this.
And very true.
Our thoughts are truly no one elses to understand.. And life is not ours to predict in the least. For what joy would we have in life it was full of certainty.
-Danneh<3
Beautiful job here.
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Thank you, its just.... what i think... and truely that is how I always think =P
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