From lofty heights seek out your weary prey,
supreme commander of flight by day.
As you soar through the atmosphere,
glide on predatory wings,
across the wide heavens.
You are queens and kings,
unique you stand.
Efficient,
deadly,
grand.
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A contest entry
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Loved this poem, everything about it was grand and i especially love the punctuation on the last few words!
Loved it! -
First Impression?
Is it and eagle or any bird of prey that you are describing or a B52 bomber or Stealth bomber? You have written a beautiful piece here - it flows beautifully and structured uniquely too - (from a wide expanse to a victim) - perhaps the last word should be left off - I like the gentle rhyme as well - keep on keeping on - Bless God - Joe
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thy words touch where nature fills the heart in that magestic tone...
unforgotten in the soul!
Yes I hear you clearly with this my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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