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Can't Do This Anymore

Can't do this anymore
Wish it would all go away
I need a little space
And too much more to say

Everythings crowding me
Pushing at all sides
Panic begins to close in
Rising like the nightly tides

How can I go on like this
Can't make sense of anything
And when I ask for help
No one dares to say a thing

Pulling me into its endless depths
The darkness consumes me
No matter how I try to escape
All I can do is silently plead....

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  • trying2understand
    December 20, 2007
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    i like it

    this poem is exactly how i feel and no one can seem to get it... but i can understand


  • Tortured Poet
    December 20, 2007

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    OMG u have no idea how much I can relate to this...theres jus so much i cud say that wud make it seem as if it were the same, but I jus dont know wat to tell u becuz no one understands me, but yes I can relate....