Kept from stronger emotion,
Dancing against night
Packed, but unfrozen
Held, though not tight
For pieces broken,
Sealed to daylight
Pacing out life,
Beating in spite
21-12-07
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aye it keeps bouncing and cracks a little here and there but we have the glue of hope and life to make sure it never breaks fully
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I love this one. I like how you used the words. I like the part dancing against the night. I also like sealed to daylight.
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Love your usage of vocabulary!!
Thought-provoking piece...
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oh!
oh let your heart beat .....let your pen write...!
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um yeah... unfortunately that's all I like too... lol
oh well~ Thanx though!!^^
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Wow this is a captivating write and full of expressive words.
Love Kept from strong emotion dancing against the night
Hugs Sis xx
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