the princess of Dawn awaits in dark skies
to arise from the darkness, veiled in light.
triumphing over the dark when she flies
oh, is she not a magnificent sight?
painting the sky with a wonderful hue
engulfing the world with a light so bright
pinks, purples, and blues shining a dieu
she raises the sun to an all new height.
Now the day closes; night is upon us
the prince of Dusk awakens once more
to send the world asleep without a fuss
this important work hardly seems a chore
Dawn and Dusk; dependent on each other
Rising and setting with one-another
Author notes
attempted englsih sonnet that i wrote during choir and math class.
Please tell me what you think
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This is an amazing sonnet. I love the image and the language. Keep up the great work.
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Forgot the bunnys hummmm... I didn't realise I already commented on this. I still love it.
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This is truly beautiful. Penned perfectly in decasyllable you have painted a lovely picture. You did an amazing job om this English sonnet. Well done!
Love,
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Excellent poem dear You have a great talent Keep up the writing. I wish you the best of luck in my contest thanks for entering
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Very nice. I enjoyed reading it. ^.^
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Hi, I liked your poetry.
Keep at it. Your doing great!
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the princess of Dawn awaits in the skies
to arise from the darkness, veiled in light.
triumphing over the dark when she flies
oh, is she not a magnificent sight?
I really admire this first stanza, it sets the reader on a pondering of the metaphor. Very nice work, my dear poetess. Thank you for sharing your talents to create a wonderful image of love. -
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hang on forgot this
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COOLio
Coolio! This is a nice poem... Usually I don't rhyme poems, but I do love your rhyming! YAY! -
Nothing like a t5ragic romance between two lovers eh? This was so tasteful and elegant... I melt when I read sonnets anyway but this was just so beautiful. Very well done, I loved everything about this... you should try making this into a series...
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well written ... you painted beautiful picture.... thanks for sharing
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OH my goodness! This is fantastic! I truly mean it, you are a world class poet. This is a perfect English sonnet composed in perfect decasyllable. The image you paint is pure magic and you even have the volta properly placed at L9. I'm going to feature this poem. I love it!
Love,
Amera♥
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