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Me To Us

Me.
Alone.
Singular.
A lonely soul.
A sad and lost man.
A broken hearted fool.
Wanting but finding no one.
Prepared to give in to sadness.
Emotions wasted on lost affairs.
A castaway in a sea of regret.
A lifeboat adrift on this vast ocean.


My salvation in this churning storm.
A bright beacon of renewed hope.
First we met and then we joined.
Each needing the other.
One joyful couple.
Two happy hearts.
Together.
Complete.
Us.

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  • Lily otv
    February 18
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    There is plenty of emotion in this piece and I like the two very different sides of the coin on display here. I think you show very well how love can turn from nothing into something in such a short time, even when we might feel that all hope is lost. We never know what is just around the next corner so we should never give up hope.


  • CarnalNineTailedFox
    January 12

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    great imagery in this one! i loved all the emotion you have put in to it! thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
    ~NineTailedFox