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Christmas Star


One
glowing
little star sits
high upon the tree,
to light  the Christmas
spirit hidden  within you 
and me.With the gifts of love
we give, this star will shine ever
bright, bringing peace and joy to all
within it's sight. Presents do not matter,
no ribbons, wrap or bows, just sitting around
with family and friends where the heart's fondness
always seem to grow. Laughter and smiles I'll cherish all
through the year, reminiscing the wonders of all those I hold
so close and
dear. One star
glowing ever so
bright, thank you
~~~for the memories~~~
~~      of this beautiful    ~~
~~  ~~          Christmas night.      ~~    ~~
~~~                                  ~~                                  ~~~

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  • Crystal Chanda Lear
    December 20, 2007

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    A really fabulous concrete poem that you have created. Your poem is very human and touching, and was a delight to read. It was also layed out beautifully on the page. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.

    David


  • pearl-dragon gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    I love your Christmas Tree. May the joy of Christmas surround you and your loved ones and I wish all sorts of wonderful things for you in the New Year. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year Storm.

    Margaret


  • PageTurner
    December 20, 2007

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    I Love your Christmas Spirit
    and your sentiments...

    "Presents do not matter,
    no ribbons, wrap or bows, just sitting around
    with family and friends where the heart's fondness
    always seem to grow."

    A Joyous Jewel you've shaped, Poet!

    ~ Nicky♥


  • Heavenly Angel
    December 20, 2007

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    Awwww, wonderfully done, my friend!
    A very nice Christmas poem and very creative!
    Wishing you the very best in this contest, hon!!
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