He had offered her a world not his own
Conjured a universe for her exclusive joy
A whimsical land of endless spring flowers
Where she and he could love eternally
Still, he found himself exiled from her
Thrown to the darkness - cast aside
All he had created stripped from him
The shriek of winter howling
In a rage she had burned the spiritual bridge
And with its destruction, was lost to him.
Alone and despairing - hollow and dead -
He became a soul of suffrages.
Imprisoned by walls self constructed.
Sealed in the sepulcher of self preservation.
Dormant and frozen - as the seasons turned.
As time flowed forward in an endless cycle.
As empires fell crumbling and turned to dust.
Until meaning had none, and love was a shadow.
Only then did he peer out at the cosmos.
Stepping out onto a rocky cliff,
Scanning the ocean before him,
Raising a foot - taking one deep cleansing breath -
Walking into emptiness and uncertainty.
Marching headlong into the world unknown.
Naked and exposed - vulnerable and naive.
Set in his determined resolution to succeed.
To find his purpose - to gain a sense of completion
To locate the other half of his heart.
To fulfill the desires of his longing to belong.
Trudging on in spite of his emptiness -
Beginning to exist - yet still not quite alive.
Feeling purpose in scattered bones
His path carved into cold ashes
He followed seven sisters of the night
Even as the hunter has ever pursued them.
Staying his course through dark of night
First asking help of the silver maiden.
He sought the scorpion, consulted the dog.
As two bears circled swiftly to see
All gathered for his benefit and pleasure.
Resting only under the golden one
At rest did he meet his quarry.
At rest did he fail to guard himself
At rest was he overtaken by shadow.
A sliver of what had been emerged
Developing - stronger - more cunning
Penetrating his chest - seizing his heart
Increasing exponentially - taking him in.
Here it was that he found love again -
or perchance it was he who was discovered
He wagered his soul - arose as the victor
Surrendered all without protest or regret.
Here it was that he learned truth
Here it was that he turned wise
Here it was that he knew absolution
Here once more was he alive.
A contest entry
- Contest for many types of poems, Prewrites allowed. by Systems Malfunction.
500 points, ended January 30, 2008, 46 entries
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Comments
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“In a rage she had burned the spiritual bridge / And with its destruction, was lost to him.” These words are the centre piece of this poem for me with all else hinging around them. With the spiritual link broken between a couple there is little else to bond them together and even though other things may seem important, when looked back upon at a later date, most will admit that it was when the link went that all else came undone. I like the end of this poem in the discovery of love once again, building strength and wisdom.


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This was great. Long, but good. Kept my attention! Good luck in the contest!


