I feel the Cold Petals,
Glide across my face.
Smooth Silky Petals,
Full of Heart warming Grace.
The Sweet beautiful scent,
Of a deeply coloured Rose.
It sends a warm feeling,
That tingles in my toes.
I taste the Cool Water,
As it rolls on my tongue.
I inhale its sickly scent,
That puts air in my lungs.
I see its Ruby Petals,
Shimmer in the Sun.
I hear a small whooshing sound,
As the tiny droplets run.
This Rose is a part of me.
A part of my body.
A part of my Soul.
This Rose is my only Life.
Without it,
I would be no more.
I would die.
I would fall to the floor.
This Rose is my body,
My soul.
The one thing in life,
That makes me feel whole.
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packed with image
and very different in outlook
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This was good. Very moving and also very descriptive. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.
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thanks
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i like thius one, its so descriptive, i neva knew u liked pink! lol jkz
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THE ROSE IS A BEAUTY OF A SUBJECT ANDTHIS WAS A NEW VIEW OF IT TO ME
I AM NEVER TO OLD TO LEARN.
JAZZY
WAY TO WRITE A POEM.
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Guys dont talk about the sleepover
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Tsktsk
Good poem though ^^
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YAY
you kinda seem like the beast in beauty and the spaz. seriously, withour the rose he dies and without that rose you die. where do you keep this rose you seak of? in your BRA?
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lol, ty u sapz. no, i keep it in THE CHAZ's bra! lol, hey saku!
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LOL
keep it in mine if you like XD -
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lol, maybe i will...
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well thinking back to the party
thinkin back to sako's party me reckons maybe you ALREADY HAVE *SHOCKHORROR*
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