I first had to find a place out in nowhere,somewhere nobody could hear her screams.A place that would be hard to find so people wouldn't find her when they went looking.
I finally found a place way out in Louisiana down by the swamps.
PERFECT!
It was a little shack barely standing and miles away from anybody.
After i returned home,I needed to bring my plan into action.I invited her over for dinner,she said she liked spaghetti,and even though I wasn't to fond of it,i cooked it up for her.I made some special "wine" for her too.I knew it would only be a short time after she passed out that she would soon come out of it so i had to hurry fast.I ran to the bedroom and grabbed my "supplies."
I laid out some plastic on the ground so I wouldn't have any evidence.I grabbed an old wooden chair and because she was knocked out i had to carry her to the chair.I had to remove her sleek black dress first so it would be easier to get my work done.She was so beautiful,such a shame she had to die.Nice firm breasts,the rest was just as beautiful.I would enjoy this night.
I handcuffed her hands firmly to the chair and shackled her feet to the bottom.I could see she was coming out of the little dose of drugs i had given her with the wine.
"WHAT THE HELL?!?"
"Hello sweetie,didn't think i was capable of this did you?"
"what are you doing"
"don't you know?I found out."
"found what out?"
"I'm not stupid,you and ben!"
She looked down knowing she was caught.
"So you see,I have to do this."
I grabbed the gag and forced it into her mouth.Her eyes widened with fear and began to fill with tears.
"You tortured me with you lies,so I'm going to torture you."
I began to use my first tool of choice which was a carpenters knife.I had always loved the softness of her skin so my first thought of course was to remove it.I was going to removed everything i loved.I started by her neck and cut all the way to the bottom of her stomach.It was a good thing i had the gag in her mouth because she was screaming and her eyes kept rolling to the back of her head.I then began to cut around her breasts and around her sides so it would be much easier to peel off the skin.There was so much blood i had to keep stopping to make sure not a drop ended up on the carpeted ground.I started tearing off the skin which by now she was going into shock.She kept jerking,sweating,and her face was more pale than a sheet of paper.I removed all the skin around her breasts and her stomach.
I began to start cutting the muscle and tissue so i could get to her heart.By the time i reached her heart she already wasn't even in this world anymore.I pulled out her heart and put it in a little plastic bag.I grabbed my next tool,a hand saw,and began to cut her body into little parts so it would be much easier to transport.I packed all the evidence into my little car and proceeded to go to Louisiana.I dumped th remains into the swamp,knowing the alligators would have a nice meal.I buried the rest of the evidence under the shack.Since she told me she gave me her heart I brought it with me back to my place and cooked it up and ate it.It was actually pretty good,tender and sweet.
Several days went by and one day in the paper i read:
*MISSING*
Synthetic Nightmare
I smiled knowing she would never be found.
Author notes
this is not true and my first time of writing like this so let me know what you think.
it was suppose to be made for a contest but the contest got removed so i just posted it.
*what makes me mad is people cheating or say they love you and then hurt you yet again.
BTW this isn't bashing synthetic-nightmare,in her contest she wanted to be murdered.
!!!RAINBOWS AND STUFF!!
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A contest entry
- Inside the Mind of Madness by Digital-coma.
1500 points, ended January 25, 2008, 34 entries
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dark and evil!
Thats all i can say... Mehehhehehe!
This is fantastic!
I loved it!
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This is a good dark intense poem.Thrilling and the fact that people make you so mad cheating kinda makes the story somewhat amusing.I sure wouldn't want to make you mad. Great write and good luck in my contest.
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Wicked...nice and dark but I also found it amusing, I know she will have loved this...her life long dream
Best of luck in the contest with it 
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LOL
YOU ALREADY KNOW HOW MUCH I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!
^_^
Finalist mah badass friend!!
HOT AS FUCK!
*makes job easier and hands knife to you*
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wickedly evil mind you have hidden there ~ LOL ~ you might had missed your calling as a murder mystery writer~ It was heartstopping intense read ~ I had a feeling when I choose to read it ~ and you certainly met my expectations ~ Nice job overall~
Thanks for entering my "Set the Bar" Contest ~ good luck to you
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This is a wickedly evil write ~ You missed your calling as a murder mystery writer~ It's an intense scary read~ You did a great job on your first time~
Thanks for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ good luck to you...
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not bad
i liked this except the part about synthetic-nightmare. if you don't like her then you can go screw yourself because she is a freind of mine.but other than that it was a good poem. keep up the good work and thanks for entering my contest. -
Wow, so dark, but it was okay. Things like this do happen now and then. It's prob better to be the murderer than the victim, but who knows? The murderer has to live with blood on his hands for the rest of his life, and prob will do it again.
I would want to love someone to death, rather than outright kill them, but that's just me.
Anyway, I thought this write was rather good, and it impressed me. Do you want to collab on a dark poem sometime? I will do it if you wish, it's not really my style, but I can handle it.
Love, your dad,
Brazos
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WOOOOW, this piece would've been EXCELLENT for that contest, oh wow...I don't even know what ot say...wow wow wow wow wow!!! I loved it 'n I think u should write another one...wow!!!!
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haha! WOW! That's good! Very scary! hahaha! I loved the ending! ( =
Very glad it isn't true.
lol.
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Thank you for entering! Well I'm glad she wanted to be murdered! There were a couple of grammatical errors and what not. Wow did you happen to be inspired by Hannibal? So much anger, but please only write about it because blood makes nasty stains on the carpet trust me I know.
Good Luck!
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OMG freakin awesomly eerie writting. Beatifully descriptive. I just felt haunted almost when reading it but I didn't wanted to stop
Well done, personally, I lOV'D IT
Cindy
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OMG YAY!!!!!!
I FUCKIN LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
HOT!!!!! ^_^
Holy hell, i can tell you right now, YOU MADE IT IN THE FINALIST WITH THIS ONE! haha, ok....you WOULD HAVE HAD THEY NOT DELETED MY FUCKIN CONTEST BUT THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!
Aw hell.....very interestingly thought out.....
BTW, NOW YOU INSPIRED ME TO GO EAT SOME S'GETTI!
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Great Story...Hehehehehehe, You had me cracking up... Not sure if she fancied the alligator feeding frenzy, HAHAHAHA.
This line stuck in my head:
"Hello sweetie,didn't think i was capable of this did you?"
Liked the innocent voice coming out in that line.
You nailed the ending as well.
Great stuff RAZORS!!
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