I dreamed the scenes of one who never dreams;
forever roamed beaches where waves run dry.
Too busy brushing the edge of fortitude
with latitude to bare the trust of love.
You stumbled while letting the ink bleed;
sighing, your meaning of love was dying.
Understanding the lack of goodbyes,
you let words on paper replace the tears.
We were each seeking refuge in solitude,
living off the love of our children,
contemplating time’s unpredictable frailty
when we read between the lines – yours-n-mine.
I scribbled loathsome, keyboard letters
about spring’s cold heart hardening
to summer’s wilting flowers - yet to bloom.
You entered verse filled silent sighs
of unattended gardens surviving near beaches
where waves spread themselves too thin.
You spoke
and my words found new meanings;
I offered my hand
and risk sang the softer song of love.
In a list
A contest entry
- My Heart Was Whole Again – Poetry and Presentation by CarolDesjarlais.
600 points, ended December 21, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 350th contest group one /finalists only by poet2angels.
475 points, ended August 26, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Woot woot congratulations on your award.
wonderful writing very glad to see this win.
Blessings.
Frozentearz -
This is so beautiful. I think perhaps my favorite of yours...
"You spoke
and my words found new meanings;
I offered my hand
and risk sang the softer song of love."
Sigh...~
You always make me sigh
Lynda
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it is a favorite of mine, as well
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Every time I read this, my eyes well with tears. So wonderfully beautiful.
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A nice place to stop in the morning
is here.
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OH I do love this piece. So very pleased to see it adorned with rightful gold. ~Pamela
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Such is sigh to swirl as one in air of feathered acceptance, for in this blissful miracle of now we see that gift is in the vision...so beautiful
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opps, I did not realize you were a judge...
but thank you for the kind words of this beautiful glimpse.
Ken
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Still speechless...
This is so beautifully worked and tender. Perfect. Simply perfect. ~Pamela
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Oh my... my...
Here is a curtsey for the man with the magical pen...
This was absolutely sensational!!!!!
I can relate to the emoitional imagery you have penned here.. Stanza'a 2 and 3 pulled the tear string in me.. because it hit so close to home.
and you did it so beautifully..
Then the ending WOW.....
I am blown away here... well done and best of luck in this contest. This is gold to me.
Delila
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