When the heavens fall,
and the skies are red,
you will not be dead.
When the rock crumbles
and the clouds are pink,
your life will not sink.
When the grass turns foul
your flesh is still strong,
you are ever long.
When the plants have died,
and the trees have fell,
you are just as well.
When the dragons burn
you, you move the flames,
playing pyro games.
Demons leave you be,
knowing your great force,
who you are of course.
Angels let you past,
knowing you’re quite weary
and a bit teary.
You’re tired like He,
you’re drained you confess,
of the cosmic chess.
The unicorns run,
your heated eyes stream,
you secretly dream
of a truce like He
does, King of the flames
is the one He blames.
It was just, it was,
forced to bring you down
to retain His crown.
You walk with your Sins,
wearing what you please,
tricking men with ease.
The shadows are yours,
as are the fires,
you need desires.
You’re a gloomy soul,
nothing makes you glad,
nothing good or bad.
You could burn the souls,
but that has been done,
now where is the fun?
Yahweh feels the same,
feeling saddened too,
nothing They can do.
When the seas boil up,
He can only see
not do, humans flee.
If He were that form,
it may be alright,
the bearer of light.
He is one of the
two tyrants at war
then, both want no more.
If Yahweh lost wrath
and He lost His pride,
humans needn’t hide.
Nothing need suffer,
but suffer they will,
they did and do still.
Yes it is so sad,
though ‘twas His free choice,
using His brave voice.
When He moves, things flare,
He forever cries,
and He never dies.
What did you like about this poem?
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i really liked it.. you definately have your ovn voice..!
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I like the way you use description in this poem. It's like he is desperate to cling on to them and you express it well.
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thank u i like ur comment very much!
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Confusing as this was... I find that I have little to say. It seems you went back and forth between Satan and God(hence the confusion) but there's one stanza take took me by surprose(or is it anger?)
"If Yahweh lost wrath
and He lost His pride,
humans needn’t hide."
One thing: GOD IS NOT NOW NOR WILL HE EVER BE PRIDEFUL AS WE ARE! EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But this was confusing!
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friken amazing nice
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So well penned. The imagery is superb. You wrote this as I believe it will someday be. Bravo on this masterpiece!!!
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thank u cherry i take pride in my poetry about Gods (I consider Satan to be a God- just not one of mine lol).
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