The way you look at me makes me melt,
When you kissed me I loved the way I felt,
I wish I could show my love for you is true,
I am in love with you all the way through,
I trust you with all my heart no matter what,
Yes you may have lied all through the days,
I may never know but I do know...
I am in love with you all the way through,
No matter what... you make break my heart,
Stab it with a dart which will hurt me yes but I will still be...
In love with you all the way through,
why you may ask.. well really I don't know,
All I know is your my one and true love and no matter what...
I will be in love with you all the way through
Author notes
This is all my fillings about my boyfriend that I have now! I love him no matter what even if he hurts me badly I can't stop loving him.
A contest entry
- Inspiration by what went wrong.
390 points, ended January 18, 2008, 12 entries
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I have said this before and I will say it again. This piece comes from your heart. It is poetry because you made it so. The redundancy if this piece shows your need for your feelings to be understood. This is a good piece to me because you simply wrote what you felt. I will add though, from personal experience that a relationship such as this may not be the most emotionally healthy way to go, but it is your life, you seem young and there will come a time when you really see there are just some limits to love. Well written and thank you for sharing this with the world.
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Beautiful piece you penned here. Great job. The imagery and flow blended well together. Best wishes to you in all of your endeavors and thanks for sharing this with me. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet.
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its kinda umm..u repeat through alot and the rhyming is a lil rusty, all on all felt the emotion, 8/10
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Hey what do you think about this poem?
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