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blue is not green
      but
green is not blue
why is this world so amazingly confused
with murder and crime got away on th streets
ghosts that murmur heads between feet
now you know what up in this blue green world

-proyouth

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 25, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Interesting write.

    Just a quick spelling mistake:
    on 'th' streets - 'the'

    Best of luck in the contest
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda