Scarlet running through broken veins
I bleed this river for you
how much more pain is there
how much more do you want me to do
I dont even understand
my own actions, my own thoughts
how can i explain to you
of years that i had fought
I cant see the light
blinded is my end of road
so many responsibilities
cant you help lighten the load
Ive changed so much for you
I am not who i use to be
but slowly its coming back again
I am begging, someone help me
Author notes
its kinda raw emotion, tried a rhyme, but its shit because its just random.. i dont know.
A contest entry
- be dark and emotinal by darkangel-darksoul.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I LOVE YOU HONEY!!!!!!!
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I am so glad you are my sister in law or I would have freaked thinking this was so personal
Congrats on the Silver babes
Well deserved !
Stay safe
Love y'all
~Manda
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i love this.. dont ever be ashamed of how you feel and how you write. this is .. wow.. its very well writen and i love the way you say it as you feel it. good luck. and thanks for entering
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