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Stepping Forward

Another day passes
I’m stronger than yesterday
Even stronger tomorrow
Because that’s who I am
A survivor of life’s torment
Optimistic till the end
Nothing, no-one will keep me down
Never have, never will
My head is held high
I step forward toward my destiny
Life will never be the same
But as it should be
As I force myself out of my cocoon
I blossom into the woman I am
The person I want to be
My dreams are within reach
I believe in myself and my dreams
My time of doubt has passed
My spirit has returned, with it, peace within
I am strong, I am a survivor

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 7, 2008
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    Gulp

    Your first trophy. This is terrific.


  • The Drifter
    August 14, 2008
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    Stepping Forward

    Excellent--Wonderful

  • icebear
    March 24, 2008

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    Banner to life

    I wish I could pull that attitude up with my socks every morning! I can almost breathe in your optimism, like an open blue sky.


  • Dutch Doll
    February 23, 2008

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    Hard to get out of that cocoon sometimes,
    another very inspiring poem, great flow, you write well... very down to earth, thanks for entering my contest

  • Liquid memories
    January 11, 2008

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    keep stepping and he goal of life will be within your grasp. congrats on the award. may your steps continue forward to be successful in getting the desires of your heart.

  • dave745
    January 1, 2008

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    outstanding poem

    a powerful motivational poem. excellent lines.... strong message"my dreams are within reach
    i believe in myself and my dreams" just a classic use of words and rhymes


  • PsychoticallyInsane
    December 23, 2007

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    OoOoO! I Really like it! it's great! fantabulous! superb! Very well written! Keep it up! ur a natural!


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    December 21, 2007

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    This so uplifting! I love reading these kind of poems. I like the first four lines the most. That is how I felt after going through a difficult time three years ago. each day was a little better than the day before. Wonderful write my friend!!!!

    GBY
    SilverButterfly


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 21, 2007

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    I believe in myself and my dreams
    My time of doubt has passed
    My spirit has returned, with it, peace within
    I am strong, I am a survivor


    what a hopeful piece and the strongness is in the words are quitely enlighted as well..thanks for the wonderful entry in my contesat...

  • LIve For Today
    December 20, 2007

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    I really like this poem alot . It has encourage me to go on and not give up . Right now I am fighting breast cancer

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