as I passed the grave yard
with tear's in my eye's
on a midnight dreary.
My heart was bleeding,
my soul was so weary.
I walked upon mist
to a dead alive place.
Seeking some comfort
or a saving grace.
Darkness around me
the moonlight my guide.
A whisper took over
and swallowed my pride.
I knocked on a door
my access denied.
I slept on the floor
then woke up and cried.
My tears fueled my anger
that I couldn't contain.
Please help me universe
my minds gone insane.
Author notes
I left a fourteen year marriage as I suffered from mental and physical abuse through control just fell out of love but he was so suicidal was the best thing I did as I now have control of my life and have wrote ever since by maralisa
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Comments
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It sometimes takes a lot before one finds the courage to leave...
I'm sorry this happened to you, I hope you're still happy and will always stay that way
You might have missed it, or I have
but I couldn't find your AP name around here
You might change that?
I will wait for it....
Good luck in my contest
XXJeannette
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Mirror image
Your poem is amazing but it was your Authors notes that mirror a reflection, only for me 20 years..
Indeed we can now take control free of the metal and at times physical abuse.
Thanks for sharing xx
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Please read the rules...
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i have put an explanation in my notes thank you for telling me
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wow, this is really good! thanks for entering!
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Wow. I loved it. It was really good. I thought it was deep and wonderful.Great job with it.
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woah
I am in LOVE!!! So AMAZING!!! Every line was beautifully written. PERFECT!!
Savina
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It doesn't sound like you're in a graveyard, but it's still a nice poem. Good work!
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Very nice! Rhyming was excellent! Thanks for the entry!
Blessings~
Az
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