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We come from different lands

Percy Penguin's home is cold
He often screams 'Ahh-Choo'
So opposite to Curly Cow
Who exhales a heated 'Moo'

One similarity in these two gifts
Is their coats are black and white
Symbolic at this festive time
That our friendship feels so right.

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 21, 2007

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    this is beautifully written and holds so much for the short amount of lines. i can image it in my head. well done

  • AlexandraG
    December 20, 2007
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    How cute and how true that they're both of the same colour.


  • penman gold member
    December 20, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very touching and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.