I feel your tongue
Gorgeous saliva
Can you pierce my throat with it?
My lungs bleed
And I kiss you and cough
Mucus and blood
The depiction of a love
Without the borders
Of beauty
Can you reach my liver
With those passionate fingers
Digging through my stomach?
Acid looks fine in your nails
And your face looks cute with my vomit
My pancreas
It excites me to death
But the green color
Of your nausea face
Makes me eat your heart
Only your face
Only
As your eyeballs meet mine in the floor
And our kisses tore apart our teeth
Our skin is no more
Beauty
Ugly
Corpses
Love
We still have our sexual fluids
Author notes
From Kyo-N with love.
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Does filthy language limit the view of love?
Comments
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That is grossly cute!!!
love it!!!!!!
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that is so cool. its very visual. love has no boundaries. right? i love the first stanza. its a very strong start. the title is strong too. nice job!
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Fallen
That just oozed wit love. I have fallen for it
All this darkness wrapped wit love is bringing me back to my freshman year in high school!
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Nice one, dear. Had you thought of suicide?
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This is awesome. Hahaha.... I suppose filthy langauge doesn't limit the view of love.
This is amazing. I really like how uniquely disturbing this is. Yikes...
hehe
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WOW!!
What do you eat everyday? Any supplements that I could get my hands on too? Awesome, man!
"I feel your tongue
Gorgeous saliva
Can you pierce my throat with it?"
What a retarded question!!
If it weren't for sanity I would be pasting the entire poem here because every line oozed macabre as if it were dipped in an infinite ocean of macabre. You have taken macabre to its heights and I shall desist from speaking anymore for the fear of turning into someone really soppy. Oh, but what a great write!!
Stunning words, beautiful gore(if ever!)! Write on!
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thank you for entering my contest.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful entry. Very well penned indeed. Best of luck in my contest and a very Happy New Year!
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Hidious, beautiful
This is astonishingly ugly, and still captivating. Interesting is all i can really think to say.
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¿Eres medico?
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¡Jesus!
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very good
i liked it very good hope to read more
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AMAZING
OMG! I have a series contest called Anatomy lesson and I simply couldn't resist to imagine this poem in it!it's spectacular!bravos!
loved it!keep this style all along because you might be surspised to find out that there are some readers(like me
) who really know how to taste it properly!
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Forgot my clappies ^__^
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I don't believe it necessarily limits the view of love... I think we just get used to the whole 'I just want to gaze deep into your soul as the sun is setting on a beach behind us' type of love... yours is more of a 'I love your eyes so much I want to pluck them out of your head and carry them with me in a little jar'...
... all the same, it's love. That's all that really matters, right?
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DIR EN GREY ROCKS!!!!, just thought I say that beforehand. Loved your disgusting take on love, I just love it when people aren't chliche!
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Does it limit the view of love,you ask?
Well,in a way...I mean the filthiness was overpowering the love in the piece...
But it was gorgeously disgusting nevertheless...
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