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The Window To Tomorrow

Breaking down the walls of silence and sadness,
while moving forward in an effort to forget the past.
Sorrows and heart break put into a locked box,
and tossed powerfully into the pounding sea.
Believing that tomorrow will be bright and free,
Hoping for the very best and taking action to ensure that outcome.
Closing the door on yesterday and opening a new window to tomorrow.

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Prompt: Erasing Yesterday
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  • Lukey
    December 21, 2007

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    Motivating

    You've created a very encouraging work here. It progresses boldly from beginning to end, and inspires one to learn from the past, but leave it behind and stride into the future. Nice job.


  • InMyFlames
    December 20, 2007
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    very good i like it


  • catz Moderators member
    December 20, 2007

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    A hopeful and inspiring poem, filled with positive thoughts for our future.

    Good luck in the contest
    Dee


  • poetryality silver member
    December 20, 2007

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    Your words flow effortlessly, and leave the reader knowing that there is always hope for the future. A wise penning here poet. Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best in the Comp.


    Much Love & Happy Holidays ♥

    Renee

  • fairyzion
    December 20, 2007
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    Very honest and hopeful. There is always light and love after the dark. I'm happy to see you believe in this faith.


  • daffodilblossom
    December 20, 2007
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    great piece

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    Oh I like this write close the door and open a window very nice piece goodluck to you in this contest much love


  • raggyann
    December 20, 2007
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    oh this is beautiful
    what a great out look
    awsome


  • parntsoftwins
    December 20, 2007

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    Beautiful, powerful and flowing with ease. I adore the message for the prompt of this contest, erasing yesterday. In your poem my favorite lines would have to be...
    Hoping for the very best and taking action to ensure that outcome.
    Closing the door on yesterday and opening a new window to tomorrow.

    Opening a new window to tomorrow, spoken beautifully. best wishes in the contest.

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