It seemed like only yesterday
when life was at its peak
before everything shattered
and I was left with nothing but hurt
left to pick up the pieces and hope for better
but that was yesterday
this, this is today.
A contest entry
- Erasing Yesterday by poetryality.
525 points, ended December 20, 2007, 7 entries
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Aw, I like this one DS!
~Lib -
Yes, it's today that really matters most for us, even if yesterday seemed better. A good take on the prompt with this thoughtful poem.
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Ah...yes! It is best to leave "yesterday" where it is. With the new day, possibilities are endless. A very simple but heart-filled take on the prompt. Thank you for this entry. I wish you the best in the Comp.
Much Love & Happy Holidays ♥
Renee
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this tells me two things you had a loss and you
you have srtrength
good poem
with a two dufferent emotions
wonderfuly writen
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There are too many cliche phrases in it for my taste.
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