she walks in shadow
traces the edge of light
wi' a smile
hideing mystery upon mystery
graceful wisdom
muted in soft spoken words
her world
is hues
her eyes
hold sorrow
like a cup
wi' a smile
begging to be traced
hinting at
ulimited bubbleing mirth
she dosent need to be pretty
she's alredy stunning
in a hidden,
natural way
and whilst she gleams
would much prefer
to follow then lead
for 'tis in others
her dreams take flight
gentle strength,
iron will
lady of dreams
dances in the rain
Author notes
just scratching the surface i suppose...
A contest entry
- Tell me about you by pinkstardust13.
525 points, ended December 28, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Magically Stunning...
Hello Wild Desert Rose 
I am in awe of your elegantly rich, yet humble poem! As a wild desert rose speaks, so shall the bearer of its name. Thank you for sharing a wee bit of yourelf with all of us!! Best of luck to you and always keep smiling, the world will be a happier place!!! 
Peace and love, Cyn
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This says so much about you in such simple terms displayed beautifully for all to ponder...you have captured the arden well...artis
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i absolutely love the imagery! and that is exactly how i envisioned describing yourself! the only thing you might want to edit is your spelling. ty for your entry! it made me very happy
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just beautiful my love
it fair trips off the tongue into the heart
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