The
days grow
shorter with
the winter time
More peaceful slumber
for things to regain their
strength So they'll be ready for
birthing life as springtime comes
round Bearing fruit to feed us during
the upcoming months So this is why I'm
thinking God has chosen to make winter
//\\
Etheree - Can You Catch me
Sun
beckons
my Ghost to
appear from out
of the shadowy
abyss. He moves out in
front of me, begging can you
catch me on this bright and sunny
day. I reply to his question, well
yes I can as soon as the sun goes down.
Prompt Shadows/10 Lines
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2386125
© Cara L. Greenlee, All rights reserved
Nonet - Fairies
fairies enjoy dancing in the wind,
mists of waterfalls bathe their skin.
hear them singing lovely songs,
whilst frolicking around.
their enchanting ways,
will comfort you.
and always,
bring us
cheer.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3742598
Dec 26 12:09 PM 2007.
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Comments
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An excellent etheree, and I am glad you tried this form! It describes the season upon us now, with thoughtful reflection on why we have winter. Thank you so much!
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Serene and clean as fresh driven snow...
...Sighhh.
Delightful, Poet.
~ Nicky♥
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You've doen a really fine job with your first attempt at an Etheree, and your poem was a pleasure to Read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering this excellent piece.
David
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I like the etheree form and your word choice is good. "birthing life" - nice.
Good luck in the contest.
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counted so much more... I'll send you something
powdery words
very nice debut with this style, not changing yourself but more contemplations given their flexibility's range... to sensical not just syllable like not forced rhyme ha-ha.
you took time with it for a flowing glow to occur on reader with middle making a dimple at "for things to regain their
strength So they'll be ready for
birthing life as springtime comes" with timeliness as belly laugh. your conclusion is as imperatively meditating since Genesis 8:22 isn't for changing a creator's mind!
degreed agreement to what can still be or come conditional,
also called -
Wonderful thoughts here for winter...Like tat a lot..
All the best!
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