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Purple Butterfly in a Size Three

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Size five shoes
walk in love
of Levis and
God's creatures,

surrounded by
aura of lavender
and purple muse
in butterfly wings,

breeze catches
fire of her
essence in light
shining in compassion,



       ~she strides in beauty.

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  • Super Emo Matt
    April 17

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    i really liked reading this. as i read it i thought of some friends i have. you feel for this friends is my assumption. here is my intake. tell me if i'm right. you feel love for this person who is only a friend. she does not know that you want more. yet you sit back and watch her life, loving everthing about her and, even though you have feelings for her, you are perfectly satisfied being her friend. if i'm wrong i'm sorry. that's the interpretation i got from this poem. good luck and good write.

  • Raging Chaos
    March 3
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    Short && sweet

    nice write, good luck in the contest

    -Raging Chaos

  • Naridill
    January 28

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    Beautiful dedication - your words, always so beautiful and fluent. This topic could relate to anyone close to there heart but with also personal touches you added.

    Thanks for entering,

  • Grey Mouser
    December 29, 2007

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    Just the response that is so deserved for this terrific tribute to a soul of beauty that graces all with her enormous heart. When two beings can find each other across vast distances, love makes them small and brings together a closeness that is perfect to behold. So many thanks for this glowing tribute and your entry into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • intanglio2ring
    December 22, 2007

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    A beautiful dedication!

    Wonderful entry for a beautiful lady!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • going nowhere
    December 20, 2007
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    beautiful!


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

    You are so right, this is a wonderful dedication to a wonderful lady. I am sure she is touched deeply by this beautiful poem for her.


  • Fire N Ice
    December 20, 2007
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    PERFECT!!

    This is sooooo fitting
    for such a beautiful soul.


  • Tam gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    HEY...I HAVE A SIZE FOUR IN RALPH LAUREN JEANS!!!! I AM SO PROUD OF MYSELF!!!!!

    LOLOLOL!!!!! ooohhhh...sis...I love you!!!
    this is beautiful! how sweet are you?
    you always bring me such joy...and you humble me with your poetry...
    you are a wonderful blessing to my world...
    without you I would not be me!
    I love you to the moon and back!!!
    Tammy
    xoxoxoxoxoxox

    I'm serious...about the Polo Jeans...LOL...SIZE FOUR BABY...


  • Ladybug
    December 20, 2007

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    a muse of delight in purple wings existing in God's nature size 5 shoe and levi jeans.

    superb write to say the least the meter is perfect and
    at ease.
    let the pen keep rolling till the ink runs dry


    Tamara

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