Abrasive words once scoured my skin
The pain the anguish I prayed for
the end
Pale and delicate now weathered and tough
Efforts to break me down have now built
me back up.
To someone else not the one you once
knew. She was quiet and meek her
words very few.
Not afraid anymore and numb to your
touch. Can walk on her own without
you as her crutch.
Judge and jury you sealed your own
fate. Kept her locked in a prison
with invisible gates.
The ball's in her court she now has
the key. Today's her release date
she's finally free......
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a brilliant piece
well done
=)
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This is nice, I really liked the way it flowed not forced at all. I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more from you if they are all this good. Thank you for sharing this poem with AP. Great wirte,
Stephanie -
Ack... this one really hit me as my husband tis in jail atm and im going there soon. u might wanna change your font... i had to highlight it to read it. a brilliant piece all in all,
hugs,
georgie,
xxx
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