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[[Never Ending Path]]

I sit and write,
thinking of what life is giving me
this every second.

I bless my path of unknown,
but yet I'm lost in a world of cruelty and random.

 I walk and keep on walking

hoping someone would stop me

and talk.

But every time when I start walking

it's like a never ending path.

 

The heart thinks softly

inside my lung.

Pours it's love to couple,

and then cries for no one to hear.

 

Misery, why do I tear?

Why you shatter my happiness

with your fame of need?

 

I live not for you...

I tear every drop just for my emotions to

run free!

 

 

12/19/2007

Author notes

I wrote this while I was at work, cause I didn't have a good day during the morning time. I think it turned out pretty good, just if you see error of wrong spelling or grammar.. sorry for that I just thought I would post it and work on it later.

Enjoy!

A contest entry

My writing can be rusty, but oh well. Enjoy! Comment if you want!!

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  • kales4
    December 19, 2007

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    Thank you for entering my contest! There are a couple errors in the poem but i dont tend to hold that against anyone, however if you want to change anything on the poem just let me know so i can re read it. The last couple lines of the poem were very inspiring to me. I liked the "world of cruelty and random" this explaination was so on point but never has anyone refered to it in such a manner. Great Job! Good Luck!