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When Emotions Take Over

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As I sit here thinking

Something crosses my mind

Sometimes people say and do

Horrid things to hurt you

Only it was said out of anger

Letting emotions take over

Ending in heartache for all involved

~vampira1665~

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Ummm, I dunno.
Written November 2nd, 2003

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  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    December 19, 2004
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    I was just looking at that pic and thinking to myself, I think she is about to get boned. Sorry, sometimes I just can't resist the urge to pun. Have pun, will travel.


  • Desire gold member
    November 4, 2003
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    Let it out and scream and shout~Great release and I have had many a days~ Keep on writing and inspiring~ Big hugs and much love~Desire


  • TheRamer
    November 3, 2003
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    Most Most Truth!

    There is much truth in this, and you have said it well! I like your form and flow in this, very uniquely written! I liked this alot Lady, keep them coming...
    Sincerely,
    MrPink


  • Immortality
    November 2, 2003
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    Tisha

    You know, I think everyone has gone through this. And I went through this not long ago... Someone whom I thought was a good friend to me, told me I was fucked because I told him that I wasn't going out with someone, who he thought I was. Then just last night Saturday He calls me a bitch, and tells me I Have an eating disorder because I'm sick... A little disrespectful don't you think? I thought so, and now he's apoligizing for it. It hurts, alot. Do you mind if I save the picture? And if you don't mind me asking, where on Earth do you get your pictures. They're so wonderful.

    Much Love
    |Kati|

  • Sideways
    November 2, 2003
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    love the title. i think the beginning could be stronger-that's such a common-sounding beginning. the ending is really strong though.
    this poem is really true too.
    good write.

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