As I sit here thinking
Something crosses my mind
Sometimes people say and do
Horrid things to hurt you
Only it was said out of anger
Letting emotions take over
Ending in heartache for all involved
~vampira1665~
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Ummm, I dunno.
Written November 2nd, 2003
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I was just looking at that pic and thinking to myself, I think she is about to get boned. Sorry, sometimes I just can't resist the urge to pun. Have pun, will travel.
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Let it out and scream and shout~Great release and I have had many a days~ Keep on writing and inspiring~ Big hugs
and much love~Desire
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Most Most Truth!
There is much truth in this, and you have said it well! I like your form and flow in this, very uniquely written! I liked this alot Lady, keep them coming...
Sincerely,
MrPink -
Tisha
You know, I think everyone has gone through this. And I went through this not long ago... Someone whom I thought was a good friend to me, told me I was fucked because I told him that I wasn't going out with someone, who he thought I was. Then just last night Saturday He calls me a bitch, and tells me I Have an eating disorder because I'm sick... A little disrespectful don't you think? I thought so, and now he's apoligizing for it. It hurts, alot. Do you mind if I save the picture? And if you don't mind me asking, where on Earth do you get your pictures. They're so wonderful.
Much Love
|Kati|
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love the title. i think the beginning could be stronger-that's such a common-sounding beginning. the ending is really strong though.
this poem is really true too.
good write.
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