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Still

Still go awe over his smile

still go crazy over his touch

still can't stop my love for him

still it's him I miss so much.





Still, it's that sparkle in his eyes

I can't help it makes me smile

I just feel like I want to break down and cry

still, it's him that I can't stop thinking of.



I still want nothing else but to be his girl

our love to be envied by everyone

I still remember when I was his life and world

I still can't shake off this love I feel for him.





Still, he's the one I want

the only one I have ever loved

to this day, I still believe hes my angel

the one sent from up above.

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just a poem written to my ex boyfriend who i still love

its a love poem to ross cuz thats all i can think of anymore

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  • Charley-
    December 22, 2007
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    Two Thumbs Way Down

    What can i say when i read this but say it's a other sad,depressing piece of shit i have ever read in the history of poetry writing.For one thing stop writing about one person it gets boring reading the same old shit over and over and over again it's like you have no life all its about is ross this and that and makes me wanna throw up seriously..


  • infinitechaos07
    December 22, 2007

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    hmm...

    Well I have to ask... is this to Ross? Cuz if it is you really need to take a step back and think of a few things. You guys seemed to never stop fighting and you constantly complained about him seeing his friends and ditching you or not calling you, and you guys would break up like every few days, get back together and then break up again... is that really the life you miss? You may love him but did you love your life with him or would you rather be with someone who will show you the same love back and put as much into the relationship as you do?