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Teenagers

I am the teenager that you speak of
In your lyrics of the song I love
The black clothing, the terrifying look
They've tried their hardest to clean me up
Forced me to put down my beloved books
When they realized it was beyond their control
They just sat back and said
"Teenagers scare the living shit out of me"

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My Chemical Romance- Teenagers

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  • Seraph
    January 1, 2008

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    Very nice take on one of my favorite songs. Succinct and biting. Great write!

  • Cursed4Eternity
    December 28, 2007
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    I love this. the end


  • -Death-s Punchline-
    December 27, 2007

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    This is a short and sweet poem, right to the point. I loved it, you did a wonderful job on this. Great job and good luck in the contest.

    best wishes
    jan


  • A Lonely Soul
    December 19, 2007

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    Awesome, I can so relate to this as well I liked it, and thought you did a nice job writing it. Thanks for entering my contest.
    ~~Victoria~~


  • he broke me
    December 19, 2007

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    ohh i really like this... hope u do well in the contest..
    wen will people understand that they dont hav the rite to try and change someone else?

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