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You are...

You are my Sun
Shineing high up in the sky
You keep my world warm
And bathed in lovely light

You are my Moon
The light in when I'm dark
My idol when I'm blue
and the thing I think about at night

You are my Air
Allowing me to breath
Cooling me when I'm too hot(headed)
And blowing the leaves around my feet.

You are my Earth
The ground beneath my feet
You catch me when I fall
And keeping me from floating away

You are my Smile
Pure and full of joy
That makes me want to sing
And see the world in white

You are my Snow
You are my Trees
You are my 'Walk on the beach'
You are the one for me.

Author notes

I wrote this for.... My loveable boyfriend. He's ever so Lovelee (that's a joke btw)

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  • Sweetangelgrace
    January 3, 2008
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    omg! This is very romantic and sweet...Its what i feel only i definitely dont have the vocabulary to express it as beautifully as you have. im so impressed! you have a gift, thanks for sharing it with the rest of us =)


    Good luck in my contest!

    ~~GRACE~~


  • klassy lassy
    January 3, 2008
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    Love has a way of doing just that, making everything about us move vibrantly and I can't think of anything sweeter in life. LoveLee! I have a special penchant for that name, as it belongs to one of my kids, too. Thank your for paying this forward to your special one. ~ Karen


  • Yemassee gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    "You are my everything!" That's what you want to say, now go kiss him and be done!

    It's lovely and he's a lucky fella to have someone say such great things!


    • LoneFairrie
      December 20, 2007
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      Thank you!!

      And I would kiss him if he didn't live five hours away. He moved too far away from me, not that that was by any fault of his own, I blame the army yet I joined the military anyways! *shruggs*


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    I thought you wrote that very

    beautiful and graphics were lovely too! How could
    anyone resist all the love within this write!
    good job poet!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : ))

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