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Christmas Tree

Star
shine bright
glow in night
green branches bend
supporting sparkle

watch glitter on the tree

and underneath, packages

surprises wrapped for Christmas morn

chocolates and candy stuffed in stockings

"Christmas tree, how lovely are your branches"

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Author notes

I hope this looks somewhat like a Christmas tree.

rockerchkpoet

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Comments

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  • Elvenfairy
    March 1

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    nice poem. I liked how you had it in teh shape of a tree. Thanks for entering my contest. Sorry it's taking me so long to judge, but I have a lot of entries to read, and I am swamped with school work.

  • baconlicious112
    December 21, 2007
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    this is so good!


  • azure85 gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    It looks like a Christmas tree, with the star on top! What a cool etheree for the holiday season, full of goodies in every line. Thank you so much!


  • Amera gold member
    December 20, 2007
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    forgot the bunnys


  • Amera gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    This is beautiful! I love the Etheree and you composed a Christmas poem from one. What a great idea for a wonferful poem.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Candy6
    December 19, 2007
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    lovely

    This awesome poem is very lovely write. It does looks like a Christmas tree.
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