The Moment

My touch leads to a shiver
The shiver leads to a spark
The spark leads me to turning your heart
Tongues intermingle tangling in each other
Sending sensations of warmth and pleasure
To every part of your body

Playfully fingers slide over every inch of flesh

Waiting for the moment when our body's mesh

Freely we roam with our mouths and hands

Until it is almost more than we can stand

Finally the moment comes when both are pleased

After having touched, pleasured and teased

Author notes

I WANT YOU.

A contest entry

Make Me Feel Good BIG POINTS!!!!! Adult 18+ by WillAlwaysLove. 1500 points, ended December 25, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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vici377
December 25, 2007
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what a tease.
just have me wanting more..lol..good imagery..thanx for sharing..best of luck in the contest
pinkstardust13
December 20, 2007

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this is definitely a tease. i want to know what happens after the lustrous sensation of exploring each other...
Blueskywonder
December 20, 2007
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A DEEPLY SENSUAL PIECE OF EROTICA
tabbiKat18
December 19, 2007
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hot
yeah! ;D very descriptive and free i like it
WillAlwaysLove
December 19, 2007

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Nice write. I like the poem very much. One thing, it should have flowed better. Your rhyming is great but should have a rhythm to it. Your words were inviting and made me feel good reading it, thank you. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.