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If only all mirrors

how do you look into the mirror
when it's not even you
living
not one but two lives

you?
you're hidden
beneath the the lies lays the truth
evil intent and malicious behavior
code names
snake
bitch
whore
slut
meangirl
etc etc
otherwise, more formally known as:
little ms. nice girl
little ms. great personality
ms. sweet
ms. never do anything wrong
ms. suck up

sometimes mirrors only reveal what you never will
sometimes you're transparent or milky opaque
with true colors showing but once in a blue moon

if all mirrors were magick
when you slipped a look at yourself
glass would crack
not because you're ugly
true souls see pure sights
facades see through petty lies
facades can only be kept for so long
and in front of so many   

mirrors never lie
if only all mirrors were magick...

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  • Afxb
    June 11, 2008

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    Great venom!!!
    Have you looked at the poems of Bean Sidhe
    and Daemon Faery who also write with such fire.
    You make a trio of Fierce and Honest Poets....quite scary too....


    • XxrockxXxgirlxX
      June 11, 2008
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      When I first saw the names, I thought you were talking about like random poets not on AP. I'll have to check out their stuff.


  • Ali - Pie
    February 2, 2008
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    beautiful

    deep poem, i love the message it has and i think it is amazing! awesome job!