All alone in the darkness
Crying, thoughtless, and hopeless
Nobody knows
How I feel
And why I cry
Alone in the darkness
The darkest part in the universe
Noone can find me
As though they didn't care
They never did and never will
I never had feelings
Emotions
Nor real friends but one
Left out with nothing to do
Not even considered anyone
I'm invisible
Known as the Ghost Girl
I can't take it
I met a friend
Who was always beside me
She never left my side
There she was helping me
Telling me whats good
And whats bad
I hope she doesn't leave or
I'll cry for the rest of my
Endless
Hopeless
Sad Life
When the end comes
I will fly away
To end my life where
I'm
Nothing
And say "Bye you annoying nothing Life!"
While crying
Author notes
This is how I really feel
A contest entry
- For Ages 12 and Under ONLY --- Just let it flow.... by Amunet Wolfbane.
380 points, ended January 15, 2008, 3 entries
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Morose
I like it! Maybe because I'm well a kinda morose poet myself. -
Good emotional content to this piece. You did well with it and much enjoyed :D


