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All Alone

All alone in the darkness
Crying, thoughtless, and hopeless
Nobody knows
How I feel
And why I cry

Alone in the darkness
The darkest part in the universe
Noone can find me
As though they didn't care
They never did and never will

I never had feelings
Emotions
Nor real friends but one
Left out with nothing to do
Not even considered anyone
I'm invisible
Known as the Ghost Girl
I can't take it

I met a friend
Who was always beside me
She never left my side
There she was helping me
Telling me whats good
And whats bad
I hope she doesn't leave or
I'll cry for the rest of my
Endless
Hopeless
Sad Life

When the end comes
I will fly away
To end my life where
I'm
Nothing
And say "Bye you annoying nothing Life!"
While crying

Author notes

This is how I really feel

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  • PariAysel
    January 20, 2008
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    Morose

    I like it! Maybe because I'm well a kinda morose poet myself.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 21, 2007
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    Good emotional content to this piece. You did well with it and much enjoyed :D