Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Evanescent Prayers

I never looked down
and i never thought twice
Could just be the reason
I never saw you on the inside
I walked above and fought like beast
I never heard the songs wrote for me

You don't have a voice
you didn't get the choice
so struggle, as you gasp for air
you wasted it all for evanescent prayers

Where was I when the blood was drawn
steel birds flew east like a bad song
where was I when you died that night
I'll never forget what I set right

The bloodshed down below I never quite recognised
the man deep inside, who was I to be here tonight
when you were dying for the better half of our fight
I never wrote a sonnet of any worth
but I screamed my words from Heaven to Earth

you were unlucky, you didn't get a voice
no one ever thought to give you the choice
so struggle, and fight, as you gasp for air
you wasted all your days in evanescent prayers.

Defalt

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • smiling eyes
    January 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    wow


  • Violet Hawthorne
    December 25, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    ok rereading it you could probably make that into a song, I've never seen a deeper poem.

  • Violet Hawthorne
    December 25, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    wow. I cant think what else to say. It had me slightly confused but I like poems that do that. IT makes me less focused on the obvious details and more focused on the poem its self, few poems have had this effect on me.