To be given toys on Christmas Day!
Oh! What Fun! I want to play!
I want a cuddly penguin and a little cow too!
With a scarf and a hat and a ribbon thats blue!
Pink or purple or white or gold!
Just give me something soft to hold!
To run up and down this big old house!
Louder than the loudest mouse!
Through the kitchen then the hall!
I just want to play with them all!
So for Christmas wont you say
That you'll give me something fun to play?!
A penguin and a cow!
Please, oh please tell me now!
A contest entry
- 24 hour quickie by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended December 21, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Allpoetry's Christmas 2007 Holiday Bash by Little Eagle.
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Comments
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Cute
Really Cute portrayal of a child's anticipation of Christmas morning---I enjoyed it
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Thank you for entering
This reads as if a child had written. I feel safe in assuming that was your intent. Nice flow and structure. Very child like in the thoughts of what christmas would mean to them.
God Bless and Merry Christmas
Tammy
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yay this is an amazing write and i love the rhyme and fun characteristics to it. it made me smile as i can image a child begging for it. well done
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