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I need you to....

Your eyes are a voice that I hear

Making your intent most certainly clear

You tell me to sit and then stand and then bend

Leaving me wanting and needing a friend

 

Tasting the juice that drips from my hand

I’ll show you how much I need your command

I need you to love me and fuck me galore

I need you to leave wanting much more

 

I need you to sit and beg me with pride

Exploring my body your tongue as a guide

I need you to satisfy the lust in my veins

Feeling my breath against the constrains

 

I need you to love me and fuck me galore

I need you to leave wanting much more

I’ll straddle and play and ride you all night

A smile on your face come morning daylight

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  • Draig aine gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Your eyes are a voice that I hear
    Making your intent most certainly clear

    oh yes when that happens, all bets are off
    nice green shiney


  • jul
    February 8, 2008
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    that's hot!


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    thy words are erotic, yet show a side of love that anyone would dream of sharing!

    Onec again I did enjoy this!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • sassylibra0074
    December 22, 2007
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    great write, makes me wanna get it on!


  • Amera gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    Oh my! Hot and steemy! Wonderful flow, rhyme and image. Did you write this to me?

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    December 20, 2007

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    I knew this was going to be good by your smiling words. I wasn't wrong, and boy oh boy, did I miss reading your smile...

    Thanks for this one, very cleverly portrayed images.

    'sensual' in the dictionary, comes under your name..

    keep them coming...


  • nunchaks
    December 20, 2007

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    That is seduction, though it really goes without saying. First of all the words are erotic and secondly you have a good rhyme scheme, which makes this poem flow brilliantly. Great structure. I had to read this poem twice because i liked the flow, so good luck. i say you have a very good chance.


  • Blueskywonder
    December 20, 2007

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    Ooh la la... this is Hot imagery! A very seductive piece of poetry drawing on the senses with a vacumm of excitement
    Direct... erotic aswell as a deeply senual piece whispering permissive

    A very good piece!


  • Lone Defender
    December 19, 2007
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    Awesome stuff, sweets ...as always. Left me hot and bothered.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    wow well now if this isnt seductive i have no idea what is -covers innocent eyes- not that i was reading ofcourse hehe. well done and best of luck

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