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For Amunet Wolfbane

In the spiritual realm
I was so very confused
my world was split
sheltered I had become.

 

Knowing nothing
except that
there was something
more in this life
but it took a while
to find my path.

 


Many times
I asked for a big sister
and was so hungry for one.


Little did I know
that at the right time
my prayers would be answered
and the spiritual journey
would be made more known
as Amunet Wolfbane
entered my life
and touched me
in such a way
that noone has before.


She protected me from being hurt
and helped
when I needed it
she watched my back
and now has my heart.


I am honored to know her
I will always be grateful
for everything she has done
and for the help she gave me.


Without her
I wouldn't have a big sister
and every day
I thank the Gods for Her.


I love you Amunet Wolfbane
Thanks for being here for me.

Author notes

This is for Amunet Wolfbane. She is a wonderful lady and if you haven't checked her out then you should!
Background is by her.

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  • mcheadle
    January 10, 2008

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    to be honored is great.

    I have had the lady's helpand i know she is great. I wrote a poem just for her. I put out another one and it raised her fur..mac
    She is a lady is all I can say.


  • earthstar
    January 2, 2008

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    This is so sweet I bet she loved it. I love to read how others have touched life with a positive uplifting way. It gives hope to others who may have just come to the site. I love several people at ap dearly. This truly touches one heart. I wanted to thank you for stopping by and reading one of my poems it left me with warm fuzzy heart. It such a blessing to me when one leaves a comment. Truly a great write. Keep up the great work.

  • sears13
    December 22, 2007
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    not bad!


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    A wonderfully beautiful Tribute to someone so very deserving of it, written by someone as eually beautiful inside and out. Kudo's Ladies.



    • Kari gold member
      December 20, 2007
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      Lissa, thank you so much for your kind words.


  • suseann
    December 20, 2007

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    Lovely dedication overflows in declared appreciation for our Gypsy Lady. She touches so many in a positive way.Nice piece.


  • catz Moderators member
    December 20, 2007

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    Aww, Kari this is such a nice poem for her. I know she's very special to you and you've expressed it with love and sincerity in this wonderful piece

    love and
    Granna


    • Kari gold member
      December 20, 2007
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      Thank you granna so very much. She is indeed very special to me and now I finally was able to express my feelings
      Love ya much Granna

  • Shadow Darkstar
    December 19, 2007

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    Awww.
    This was touching. I love Gypsy too, because she's been EXTREMELY laid back with me, considering the crap I've pulled. She is most definantly an angel, and should be treated as such, or at least, shown how much we love her.

    The only thing I have to say about this, in the form of it all, was it was a little difficult for me to read, because there were no stanza breaks. Other than that, this came from the heart. ♥

    {{Mike no making my contest writers crying. I should sue you! Just kidding. }}

    BTW...Are you going to write anymore since you gave me that request?


    ♠ Mell ♠


    • Kari gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      hmm thanks for bringing it to my attention about the stanzas. I'll try and correct that later if I can.

      I agree with everything that you have said about Gypsy in your comment


      I might write two more dedications if it comes with what I say, I am not sure..but I am really glad and honored that you allowed me to do this for Gypsy.
      Thank you.

      • Shadow Darkstar
        December 19, 2007
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        It was my pleasure. Even the mods need a something for Christmas from some ordinary members like myself. I only wish I could do more for them.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 19, 2007

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    I don't even know what to say. I'm just floored by this Kari. It's so beautiful, you've really touched me with this and honestly, I am speechless! Thank you hun This is...awww Thank you. Blessings, Gypsy


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    December 19, 2007

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    Kari, True words spoken always bring a smile
    You are loved in return without doubt.

    well done and never stop believing.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    this is a beautiful and wonderful dedication which speaks kind and tender words. well dne and best of luck


  • melodramatic emo
    December 19, 2007
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    "yay lovely moving beautiful piece honey great job

    • Kari gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Mel, thank you. I am glad you liked it


  • AnnD Moderators member
    December 19, 2007

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    Kari, this is a beautiful dedication for her. I am sure she will love it.


    Ann

    • Kari gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Ann,
      Thank you so much for your comment. I so appreciate it

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