I sit here on the flooding ground
Surround by my feelings and rain pouring down
Rain soaking through my clothes, I barely care
I realize that I'm alone with no one standing there
I blame the way I feel solely on you
You bring up the pain it's, what you do
You told me that you needed my love
Then you said SHE was sent from above
Do you not realize you can't have it both ways
That I'll never love you not one more day
Or least I say that as I sit her crying
Releasing my feelings, my love slowly dying
You were there in front of me a while ago
Just standing there telling me what I now know
I still can't believe what it is you told me
Standing there thinking that my heart wouldn't bleed
And even though it's been over two hours now
I'm still sitting here trying to figure out how
It's not like I didn't love you or I wasn't there
I guess it's that you found someone else with more care
But it still hurts and I still feel all the pain
As I cry sitting here in the pouring rain
Author notes
sorry if this is too long...I think I just kept going on and on...but hopefully this works! I loved the picture by the way!
A contest entry
- Let the Picture Inspire You by delightfulmess.
700 points, ended December 24, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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It is not too long because the flow is excellent. 
Well done and thank you for entering my contest. 


Delila


