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The Pouring Rain

I sit here on the flooding ground
Surround by my feelings and rain pouring down

Rain soaking through my clothes, I barely care
I realize that I'm alone with no one standing there

I blame the way I feel solely on you
You bring up the pain it's, what you do

You told me that you needed my love
Then you said SHE was sent from above

Do you not realize you can't have it both ways
That I'll never love you not one more day

Or least I say that as I sit her crying
Releasing my feelings, my love slowly dying

You were there in front of me a while ago
Just standing there telling me what I now know

I still can't believe what it is you told me
Standing there thinking that my heart wouldn't bleed

And even though it's been over two hours now
I'm still sitting here trying to figure out how

It's not like I didn't love you or I wasn't there
I guess it's that you found someone else with more care

But it still hurts and I still feel all the pain
As I cry sitting here in the pouring rain

Author notes

sorry if this is too long...I think I just kept going on and on...but hopefully this works! I loved the picture by the way!

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    December 20, 2007

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    It is not too long because the flow is excellent. Well done and thank you for entering my contest.


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