My soul captured in your hands
Its bonds secured by love's demand
Given life to breathe; memories fond
Passion's rivers pool in euphoria's pond.
My mind meandering buoyed in silver,
Synapses fired reverberate a shiver.
Hearts crave release from all their desires,
The world forgotten an all its liars.
Your words unlace the emotions furled,
Sweet blessings given hereby beryled,
Artistic gifts traded with this feat.
Our longings met and fell in defeat.
You diminished the words that here belong
Denied our love. - - erased our song
The goal released, your lips resigned
Heartaches climb; our kisses left behind
You kill our hope in security's wake
Revise the promise for marriage's sake.
Buried feelings present to you the prize
Caring spirits seen fleeing ~our demise
Please tell me what you think
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This is full of ideas and imagery. Was very nicely-written. Thanks for sharing. -
Outstanding
There is a lot of thought that has gone into the poem, perceptive and full of ideas. I especially liked the third stanza. The rhyme is fluid and articulate. A well-written emotional poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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you rhyme very well! i enjoyed the emotion of this! great poem and i wish you good luck in my twin's contest. Merry Christmas!
~Dommi
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